Open Poetry #49 |
Playtime |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Playtime Playtime, that twice a day interlude Escape from the formal classroom Sounds of the girls skipping games Drifting though the open window The same old rhymes, handed down Sang by mothers and grandmothers ~ I’ll tell ma when I get home The boys won’t leave the girls alone They pull our hair and break our bones I’ll tell ma when I get home ~ Miss Crawford smiled Children, her children The yearly conveyor belt Which renewed the flock Long before teenage uncertainty Sullied their innocence ~ She crossed to the window Scooting Tommy on his fifth lap An eight year old torpedo Trailing an errant shoelace Never to study at Ruskin college But destined for happiness on a red tractor ~ Not long now, a month or two Before the march of progress Trampled the village school Neglect in the ruptured tarmac in the flaking paintwork and rusting window latches ~ The town school new, grotesque A sterile box of plastic and glass Miss Crawford retired to her homely cottage Where, on a soft summer day She could see the old school And hear the ghosts of the children at play ~ I’ll tell ma when I get home The boys won’t leave the girls alone They pull our hair and break our bones I’ll tell ma when I get home |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Delightful! Memories tugging at the heartstrings of childhood. You captured it all perfectly! What a joy to read! ~L |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
This is sublime, and I know the song too. |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
Clancy Brothers |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Miss Crawford within this poem made me think of Miss Reinhart, my first grade teacher. Yep, I was one of those pulling at the girls' hair. Fun read. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
There's much peace to be found on a "red tractor", like a Farmall Super 'C', for one. Great read Cari, extraordinary. Loving Linny Jean is poetry. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderful writing...james |
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