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Open Poetry #49

My Sun

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2016-06-22 05:56 PM

You are the light
That I bask in
Slowly turning
In an out of my seasons
Light and dark
Hot to cold
You hold me
On course
In the endlessness
Of my space
Without you
I’d be a lifeless rock
Spinning at the whims
Of distant gravities

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-06-22 06:18 PM

It is nice to have a relationship such as you describe.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Cari
Member
Posts 411
Englnand

2 posted 2016-06-23 03:45 PM

Yes indeed the sun sustains life but also every atom in our bodies comes from stardust. We are all the children of the stars. No offence meant to religious beliefs.
A most enjoyable poem.

Cari.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-06-23 09:52 PM

very nice...james

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2016-06-24 07:18 AM

JP-Yes it is. It is also troubling to realize how lost I'd be without it.~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2016-06-24 07:19 AM

thanks Cari! No offense to my beliefs for sure! ~L

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2016-06-24 07:20 AM

Thanks James! ~L

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