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Endlessly Blue (a repost)
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Endlessly Blue (a repost) |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Even in that coldest the sun did shine. When the wind was still, warmth came weeping tears from ice. Blinding brilliance frozen into long daggers of crystalline commemoratives. The prism’s purloined hues danced on beaming rays and shimmered upon a sky that appeared endlessly blue. LGR 3/8/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, this does sound familiar. You write about the wind so vividly as it caresses the ice tears. And the beaming rays against the sky so blue. Excellent! ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry! I ran across it and didn't remember it and thought it was pretty good (I was surprised I wrote it) It seemed fitting so I ran it up the flag pole again! Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm glad you ran it up that flag pole the second time, I have a feeling it impacted me more the second time around, which happens frequently doesn't it? Yes it is good, and no you shouldn't be surprised you wrote it, you are a damn fine poet. ~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~ |
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Jack Napes Member
since 2014-02-22
Posts 290Phaedra's Womb |
quote: Cool, clear and sharp at the tip. Nice work here. Touch, but don't look |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jack, I'm partial to that line myself Lori |
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