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Open Poetry #49

Remembering Sarah Marshal

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-05-09 10:16 PM

Remembering Sarah Marshal

When I meet you on the beach
and you are close enough to reach
as palm trees sway
as waves roll in and roll away,
my mind turns gently to you
wanting to know you better;
to know the presence of your personality,
to touch the softness possessed by your heart,
I don't want to seem ridiculous,
I don't wish to throw away my heart,
but I will confess to you this secret,
I have a hard time being without you
at the times when we're apart.

JamesLee
5/9/16

This is written in remembrance of a movie
that was about vacationing in Hawaii, that's
been out for awhile, called "Forgetting Sarah
Marshall", it was surprisingly good.

Pete_W
Member
Posts 185
Scotland (UK)

1 posted 2016-05-10 04:57 AM

Nice write, conveys a great sense of tenderness, enjoyed reading this.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2016-05-11 11:48 PM

Thank you Pete for reading and responding...james

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