Open Poetry #49 |
Life's perfect day. |
whitbypoet1 Junior Member
since 2014-09-02
Posts 40 |
There is a place of crystal streams Where harp strings play your sweetest dreams And where your eyes, though closed see skies That calm your heart and hypnotise The deepest reaches of your soul With images that make you whole, And moments that will draw near soon To change your life then change your tune. So many songs of whispering waves Where evening sleeps , yet always saves The ones that mean so much to you The ones that help you travel through Those hallways of unhappiness We sometimes wander, more or less Like nomads of a rhyme less verse That search to find the poet’s curse. There is a place where time grows frail And where the sun is always pale A joining of the sea and sky Where only lonely sea birds fly, A sutured insignificance, Where some see gold and some romance Yet still a place where dream filled sleep Holds thoughts and dreams that dreamers keep. There is a poem we all would write Of beauty and of second sight That carries heaven in its heart And makes the fears of night depart, So all of us walk hand in hand And every one will understand That love for all's the only way We can create life’s perfect day… |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Absolutely stunning!! Every word speaks to the heart. There is much comfort and sorrow, and yet your message is one of hope that stirs the depth of my soul. Thank you for your poem, it is very beautiful. |
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Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
lovely poem, the line about lonely sea-birds reminded me of Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Enjoyed, thanks. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderful...james |
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