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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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 [a makeover - for villanelle effort] Dewdrops cling to blades of grass, they glisten in early morning light. nature's wonders one can't surpass. Foggy mists drift by the pass cover the trees at their fullest height dewdrops cling to blades of grass. Flower buds awake en masse shy maidens such pure delight nature’s wonders one can't surpass. Creeper vines hug the bluegrass, green sentry guarding their site dewdrops cling to blades of grass Sunlight sparkles like wine from glass shades of bushes offer respite nature’s wonders one can't surpass. Morning landscape so full of class poems are born their flames ignite dewdrops cling to blades of grass nature's wonders one can't surpass. @jjote 04/14/2016 [This message has been edited by jjote (04-15-2016 09:18 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a grand poem giving the blooming of spring its due, jjote . . . Your rhyme was superb, your indepth thoughs pure insightful! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Thanks Jerry, yes spring's here I hope at last, - no more snow or icy storm. |
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