jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
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2016-03-26
03:07 PM
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[a lazy poem, just going with the flow of the moment]
On a pristine stretch of solid sand its serene surface bathed in lazy sunshine, I long to hop on a boat, let my mind stop thinking, let it rest in contemplation and wonder how I can ever stop life moving on.
I stare at nothing, not forgetting still remembering old memories. Intoxicated and seduced, I breathe in a clear landscape stirred to life by a summer wind - such is nature's orchestrations, scrub the world clean of chaos, astonishing the senses.
@jjote 03/26/2016
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
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2016-03-26
06:26 PM
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Last two lines were kickass lines . . .~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~
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jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
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2016-03-26
08:11 PM
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thanks Jerry, spent vacation here last Jan..too bad it couldnt last forever
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2016-04-09
08:49 PM
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very nice...james
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Ari Squire
Member
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In The Phallus Lane
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2016-04-10
03:36 AM
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Vacations are like that. You no sooner get off one and you need another to recover from it. Somewhat perpetual as long as your money holds out.More feelings and fewer words please
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2016-04-14
11:28 AM
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Very beautiful, dear Josefina! When everything is bathed in light we manage to be in the flow of harmony.
Love, Margherita"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." (Rumi)
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jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
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2016-04-15
01:33 AM
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thanks James, Ari & Margherita for your visit
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