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time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2016-03-25 03:44 AM

I remember
the crashing
of the fall,
and the smack in the face
of the ionised atmosphere.
The crisp clean jolt
of freshly created
oxygenated air.
I remember the crash
of the fall
in water crystal clear,
beneath natures
thunderous waterfall.
Floating in the thrall
I gave the world
not a thought at all.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2016-03-25 06:42 AM

Frank, I know what you mean I saw it the same way.
Good writing!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

2 posted 2016-03-25 06:49 AM

Eric, thank you for the read, it was just one of life's simple pleasures. Nice to come across someone who knows what it's like.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2016-03-27 02:21 AM

It's so nice to have something that chases the world away and then when we remember it and describe it as well as you have then we're right back there again. That's pretty cool don't you think?

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2016-04-03 01:59 AM

Most interesting. Enjoyed.

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

5 posted 2016-04-03 02:30 AM

Makes me think of Annie Taylor's barrel ride!

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

time prophet
Member

since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

6 posted 2016-04-05 05:55 AM

Dear Helen, I guess, but then floating around in the water dressed as well as the moment one was born, you don't actually get around to thinking about a lot at all. Then the noise, a little like white noise, prevents anything else from intruding.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

7 posted 2016-04-05 05:56 AM

Marchmadness, thank you for stopping in to read.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

8 posted 2016-04-05 05:58 AM

DaysofView, a little less adventurous than a barrel ride. But none the less exhilarating. Also gives a person some time to reflect on how great a day can be.

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