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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-03-17 02:09 PM



A Beatle Down my Pants

That’s tough Day Tripper
Losing your Ticket to Ride
Now we have to take
The Long Winding Road
To Get Back to where you belong
~
Come on, Come on
No, I don’t want to Hold Your Hand
So you had A Hard Days Night
You’re a bit Here There and Everywhere
That was Yesterday, get over it
~
Here we are, Penny Lane
Hi Michelle, She’s Leaving Home
Wants to be A Paperback Writer
Yep; You're Going to Lose That Girl
~
Elenor Rigby she’s gone too
Where? Oh, somewhere Back in the USSR
Lovely Rita. Ah, you know I gave her
All My Loving
Even let her Drive my Car
~
Hey Jude we’re home
Strawberry Fields Forever eh?
You know Something
You’re going Nowhere Man
But I am Hello Goodbye
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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2016-03-17 02:13 PM


Clever!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
2 posted 2016-03-17 06:21 PM


Clever, playful piece. Stark contrast to one of your pieces I read earlier today.
jjote
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since 2002-12-25
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Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2016-03-18 02:58 PM


yep,ingenuous stringing together of Beatle songs. enjoyed
Balladeer
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4 posted 2016-03-18 05:52 PM


It wasn't my fault, your Honor. I didn't know She Was Just 17!!!!
DaysofView
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Just A Slice Of The Pie
5 posted 2016-03-19 11:44 AM


Wow! This is so much fun to read!  

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

Namyh
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6 posted 2016-03-21 06:06 PM


Cari - For 'Eight days a week', I 'Saw her standing there' and when I told her 'I'll follow the Sun'. She just said 'Let it be' and I did. Much enjoyed Cari. Namyh
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