Open Poetry #49 |
Knowing Miss Julia |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Knowing Miss Julia Let me tell you about a friend I know, her name is Julia, Ju-li-a, Ju-li-a, Ju-li-a, this women I knew her heart was blue, seems that as a young girl from America she had met a man when she had saved her money and took a summer vacation in Japan, and while she was in Japan she met a very special man, he was as strong as a lion and as gentle as a dove and before she had finished her vacation in Tokyo she had fallen in Love with this hard working gentle man, she and him became the best of friends and they both believed the friendship would never end, for his profession he was an Ironworker, and shortly after she had gone away he fell from a bridge he was working on in the middle of a summer day; she didn't have the money to return to Japan right away, later that summer when she visited the bridge were he had fell the trip was a sad one but all went well she felt his presence there and she met all his friends as well, Ju-li-a, Ju-li-a, Ju-li-a, together they all rejoiced in his life, sometimes they cried, yet many times they laughed together as they shared stories of his life, together they said prayers for him and each other, and she had a special prayer for him to the God they both believed in, they all threw flowers of remembrance into the water that flowed under the bridge and they celebrated the life their mutual friend had lived. JamesLee 3/11/16 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James many melancholy swings in this piece. Quite the story. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James many melancholy swings in this piece. Quite the story. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
a sad endingto a beautiful friendship, but the man would smile somewhere in the other life he went to at the celebration of friends remembering him. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you ethome and jjote for the nice response...james |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This is a great piece. |
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Ari Squire Member Posts 488 In The Phallus Lane |
A proper eulogy in its way. More feelings and fewer words please |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you Juju and Ari for the nice response...james |
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