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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Go We agreed remember, it’s over The flames died, the fire is dead So why do you breath on the embers? Litter my apartment with memories Scatter your flotsam through the lonely rooms ~ I’m struggling to delete you from my life But you’re not helping Laundered pillows still carry your perfume You continue to invade my dreams Ignoring the Keep Out sign ~ Friends look at me with sadden eyes Comfort me with platitudes I don’t need this Loosen the bonds, remove the chains Just go woman Go * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh, this is a poem after my own heart. If we could not be besotted with their scents, even their presence when they are not there, we would finally get some rest over the matter. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I get a feeling you really don't want her to go despite trying to erase memories of her. So maybe you can still win her back. |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Oh..yes..we are able to Bewitch sometimes.  Good read Poet Cari J |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
This sounds so gutsy and hurts to the bone... excellent. ~L |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
You can say "go" all you want.. But she will never leave, even if you "check out" "We (you) are programmed to receive. You can check-out any time you like, But you can never leave!" Hotel California- Eagles Composers- Don Henley, and Glenn Frey enjoyed |
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