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Open Poetry #49

Pond full of petals

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

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Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2016-02-20 11:12 AM

pond full of petals
fingers of flowering seers
tell me of his love

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2016-02-20 11:43 AM

Very pretty and concise.
The reader can add a lot to those lines...

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-02-20 11:59 AM

Sort of a stand back and allow the elements cast him and you in a very good light.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

rainyday
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Posts 304
Heartland USA

3 posted 2016-02-21 07:53 PM

Nice going DoV, a very Dear Haiku.

J

MissMarti
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Posts 87
USA

4 posted 2016-02-22 09:55 AM

Nice writing! I love haikus and love the title!

"You will never regret being kind!"

DaysofView
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since 2014-04-01

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Just A Slice Of The Pie

5 posted 2016-02-22 11:09 AM

Thanks everyone! Whenever I think of my Billy boy I always write for him!

If I were more than I am, I'd see things differently instead of the same all the time.

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2016-02-22 11:49 AM

Perfect Haiku form...well done

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

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