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Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

0 posted 2014-02-22 07:08 PM

Words are
all I have
to set the
dance to music,
and the music
is in you
as it is in me.
Time and caution
be damned to the wind
Let's dance
while the moon
is blue.

Touch, but don't look

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-02-22 07:15 PM

Yep. Take a chance on the blue moon in the blue room.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

Jack Napes
Member

since 2014-02-22

Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb

2 posted 2014-02-22 07:28 PM

Thanks for reading my poetry!

Touch, but don't look

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2014-02-22 08:00 PM

Welcome to Pip! This is a delightful first post.

Margherita

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

4 posted 2014-02-22 09:57 PM

Oh yes, I often go out at night to check on the moon. It would be lovely to "dance by the light of the moon" as the old song implies.
Enjoyed your post. Jo perry

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

5 posted 2014-02-23 04:55 AM

Words, dancing and music are all good elements of poetry Mr. Napes and the inclusion of all three in yours makes a top shelf contribution.

Welcome indeed!

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2014-02-23 05:52 AM

If this is a first serving, I can't wait for seconds Jack! Welcome to the blue buffet, I hope you feel welcome here!

Lori

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

7 posted 2014-04-13 09:58 PM

LOVE this 'write!'

Blue-moon dancin' ... yes indeed !!

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

8 posted 2014-04-15 11:08 PM

That's a pretty shade of moon!
Enjoyed and welcome to pip!
Ms. E

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2014-05-02 09:07 PM

perfect pitch and balance. Nice to read you.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

10 posted 2014-05-03 07:37 AM

I like your positive attitude

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

11 posted 2015-02-01 06:44 AM

so sweet! loved the imagery the very few words produced! well penned.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2015-02-17 11:17 PM

nice...james

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