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Open Poetry #49

Crystal Clear Persuasion

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-02-17 10:10 PM

Crystal Clear Persuasion

When I'm with you, I
enjoy talking to you,
you make life matter.
When I'm with you, I
I enjoy looking at you,
looking gives me pleasure.
When I'm with you, I
count my blessings, for it would
take forever to find better.
When I'm with you, it is a joy
to share my life with you,
for you are a woman I treasure.

JamesLee
2/17/16

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2016-02-18 02:43 AM

this is so beautiful and enlightning declaration, i Wonder

yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-02-18 07:16 AM

Your words convey so much romantic feelings.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2016-02-19 07:56 PM

Thank you 2Islander2 and JerryPat2 for reading and responding...james

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2016-02-20 10:41 AM

Superb romantic lines James.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2016-02-20 11:58 AM

Enjoyed. Treasures are always worth looking after.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2016-02-23 08:36 PM

thank you ethome and Honeybunch for the nice response...james

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