Open Poetry #49 |
Hearts on the Radar Range |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Hearts on the Radar Range Passenger side lover take me for a ride love take me for a fool and the night is empty and cool but these five senses can feel there's something strange so weird to discover we're just hearts on the radar range and there's a pool of blood at the door something's out there and it's pounding always pounding for more Driver side there's nothing here to hide there's nobody here at all no response to my clarion call but these five fingers can feel there's been a serious change the drummer counts off to my heart on the radar range but the beat comes apart at the core something's tearing 'round inside and I'm crawling on your floor Easy tiger easy now a communique from the sky on down informs me of love left out there alone under a faithless moon the color of bone easy lover easy now I'm looking for your heart on the radar range of this town won't you give me a sign 'cause your love is on the line someone's out there and they're destined to be mine Passenger side love take me for a ride lover take me for a fool just take me, fate has been so cruel and this five senses can see there's something strange so weird to discover we're just hearts on the radar range and there's a fool for love wanting more something's out there and it's pounding always pounding like a headache tide against the shore of my mind driver side there's nothing here to hide but these five fingers can feel there's been a serious change the drummer counts off again to hearts on the radar range but the beat comes together at the core someone's tearing 'round inside and I'm falling at your door Steady, steady as she goes just where she goes nobody ever knows inform me of the whereabouts of desire where's that passionate sun to set me on fire steady, lover, as I go I'm looking for the puzzle piece heart in the lost and found shoot out your signal flare tell me love is waiting there this one is desperate and is searching everywhere for someone to care for someone to carefully rearrange the clockwork of my heart on the radar range "He turns his money into light to look for her" - U2, 'Lemon' |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Wel, soul drifter, I certainly hope that lover "out there" will read this poem, be touched by it, and rush into your waiting, loving arms. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Passenger side love take me for a ride lover take me for a fool just take me ------------------------ Hey soul drifter, I am so happy to read you here today. I loved every word of this, and your title sends me over the moon. You are such a gifted wordsmith and I adore laying eyes on your poetry. happy hearts my man, may you always fly safely under the radar. |
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