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My Daughter
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
She stands between me and the twilight like a guardian angel. Patient, tireless, resolute. Always on duty. She is banking Karma coins at home where charity begins. Ida Werrett |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi there. It's good to see your name here. As always I enjoy your short verse poetry. Love the subtle messages you tuck in so sweetly. Hope you are well, Ida. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have had a few health issues that have kept me off the site for a while but I am doing much better. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
So happy to hear that you are doing better, Ida, and that your daughter was there for you. Special feeling. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Your daughter will become rich in Karma coins...Beyond her imagination, as she projects the true meaning of Namaste, she will be rewarded greatly. Love this little poem...its words are much bigger than the space they take up... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your lovely comments. Today is my daughter's birthday and this is part of her birthday present. No one could ask for a better daughter and yes, she is building great Karma. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Ida, i am indeed very glad to read a post of you again, it has been a while, a long while, your poem has the subtlety of your heart, and i am glad too that yor dauhgter inspired you such living thoughts will read you again very soon yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you yann. It's nice to be back. Trying to catch up. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a precious wonderful gift for your daughter on her birthday, dear Ida! You tug at my heartstrings with this little gem of a poem. And let me wish your daughter a very Happy Birthday and abundance of divine blessings. I am happy to hear you are doing better. Love and hugs. Margherita  "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Margherita. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Margherita. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Margherita. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Margherita. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
 Dear Ida, when you can't see your reply, it is necessary to reload the page, then it will appear. I have to do that every time I write a comment, otherwise I can't see it. I don't know the reason for this, maybe it is a question of cookies ...Much love and hugs. Have a beautiful Sunday! Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
That's beautiful, my friend - a true and heartfelt expression - one sorely neglected by many that assume it's their right. But you truly understand it's not a right. You feel the love, compassion, understanding and true beauty of another's gift to you. Deep bow from me . . . Jimmy |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Margherita and Ida - me too on the page reloading, has been that way for at least a couple of years. But it works. j. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thanks for the tip Margherita. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you Jimmy. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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quatro04 Junior Member Posts 12 |
I love it!!! Beautiful sentiment. |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
This piece for your daughter tugs at my heartstrings. A Birthday blessing for your daughter! Hugs, Marti "You will never regret being kind!" |
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MICHELMAS Member
since 2012-02-15
Posts 305Lancashire England |
daughters, oh so precious Michael |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you fellow poets. I value your opinions. Ida |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
With four daughters of my own how could I not adore this? Fine sentiments expressed here, well dine. Cari. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow, that's so good Ida. Gotta love them all the way. Eric true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, this strikes a chord within me. That's what poetry is all about and you "poeted"well. A |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all for your comments. They are nich appreciated. Ida |
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