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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2016-02-04 09:20 PM

Beauty of the Coconut Trees

As the waves
come washing to the shore
I play my ukulele
to the woman I adore
and as she smiles I sing a song,
and she keeps smiling and softly sings along
to the words of my warm and romantic love song;
our song tells a story
of two lovers never wishing to part,
because they truly love each other
with all of their hearts;
as I sing this song
she sings along,
as I tell her of my hopes and dreams
it seems to be a sweet love song,
so I tell her as long as the waves
come to this shore,
she will be the woman I adore,
and I tell her how she touches my heart
and fulfills all my dreams
among other romantic things;
the moon seems to be in agreement
with her and me,
shining on us brightly as we sing
among the coconut trees,
and now they seem to sway along with our song,
almost like they want to sing along,
sharing our song on the sandy shore,
under the silky moon,
my sweetheart and me,
and the beauty of
the coconut trees.

JamesLee
2-4-16

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2016-02-06 06:01 PM

quote:
the moon seems to be in agreement
with her and me,
shining on us brightly as we sing
among the coconut trees,
and now they seem to sway along with our song,
almost like they want to sing along,

Oh, but of course the trees sing along, dear James.

This is truly enchanting, I am smiling in appreciation of your sweet love poem!

Love,
Margherita

"Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance."
(Rumi)

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2016-02-07 12:50 PM

your words are like silk, so romantic, and they open the door of journeys, thanks

yann

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2016-02-07 03:31 AM

and I tell her how she touches my heart
and fulfills all my dreams
among other romantic things;
the moon seems to be in agreement
with her and me,
shining on us brightly as we sing
among the coconut trees,

James you are undoubtedly the true romantic.

Well done!

true love never looks after it's own interests

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2016-02-07 11:42 AM

enjoyed, my friend.

j.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2016-02-07 08:33 PM

James, keep the serenading going, just be careful - kipping an eye out for falling coconuts.

Excellent writing, my friend.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2016-02-10 10:56 AM

How romantic! I can just picture it! Great write! ~L

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