Open Poetry #49 |
It can not walk...... |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Another meager attempt at making a picture better, by adding a few poetic words..although the picture is a poem by itself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Words absolutely fit the picture my friend. Very well done. j. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Ice and that is a great pic! Your words fit it perfectly. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Gettin' artsy, Ice and you have done it well. The picture compliments your poem magnificently. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sensitive and thoughtful poem ice. Ida |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Quite the best combination of picture and poem I’ve read. Brilliant my friend. Cari. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thank you, friends. This picture was taken by a British, poet friend of mine..many poems could be written, and pasted on it... Your comments are more than I expected, at least on the words. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Indeed! How fragile humans are when they arrive on Earth! Almost a whole year will be needed to learn to walk! How gentle and poignant the picture and your words, dear Ford. I enjoyed this much. Love, Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Visual, and audio inspiration have great appeal to me. The tiny foot, a beautiful song, the stigma of flower, a womans soft voice..gentle things of life, that balance out the hard things life has chosen as appealing to me. This picture stirred something in me. Thank you for the reply. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...the picture and the words...james |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
Oh...You did the pic justice Ice, this warms the heart. Enjoyed, J |
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