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To Die for Love ('edited' version)
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To Die for Love ('edited' version) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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To Die for Love On this misty moonlit night ... yearning for someone to give my heart and soul, and all the passion that I am or could ever be. You must be somewhere in this ever-changing world and more than just the most beautiful of shadows within a dream of a dream. If I must die on a night such as this, then let me die for love! --- b. e. adams [1/31/2016] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sadly beautiful, dreampoet. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, "Blues!" |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nice romantic flow into the writer's position captures the mood very well. Great writing! true love never looks after it's own interests |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thanks !! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope Love comes up and taps you on the shoulder...james |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you, JM ! ... no 'taps' ... Love 'punched me out' instead, unfortunately! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Excellent romantic poetry. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
As always,thank you so much !! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A yearning heart produces waves of unknown power I believe, so while you write your wonderful romantic verses, somewhere out there a heart will feel a tremor inside and who can know the magic of Universe and its ways to bring two people together?! Trust and write on! Emit your waves of yearning! And ... let go of the past heart pains! Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
as always thanks Margherita for your lovely and most kind words! ... however, the thing I have written about the most (Love) is the primary thing that seems to have eluded me (probably some cosmic irony in that fact) ... |
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