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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-01-30 10:40 AM



Wewelsburg.
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The father reads aloud, spitting glory,
A small boy with flawed eyes
Basks in puff ball dreams
While mother, with patient indifference
Clicks her needles
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And so the mind visions are conjured
He unsheathes the sword of chivalry
Marches with the legions of the valiant
As Teutonic Knights go to battle
Across the flowered carpet
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He sees a perfect world of untainted genes
Purity in blue eyes and golden hair
Siegfried bestrides the cosmos
Not in Marienburg
But here, in Wewelsburg
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The small man turns to the in- tray
Peers through rimless glasses
And signs with a flourish
Ten thousand more
Are unfit for the new world.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2016-01-30 06:52 PM


Your poem transmits an uneasy feeling, Cari. I vaguely remembered something "dark" relating to Wewelsburg and therefore I googled it and indeed its history is gruesome! What cruelties have been perpetrated in the name of that crazy dream of a "Reine deutsche Rasse"!!

A well rendered historical/political flashback.

Margherita

ice
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since 2003-05-17
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2 posted 2016-01-31 04:31 AM


Poignant, and certainly regretable history..

There is great skill in your poetry--
This one shows that on every line, not one wasted word..

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

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