Open Poetry #49 |
Dreamcatcher. |
Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
Stealing through the open window The traveller of the night draws near Gliding silent to the bedside Bends and whispers in your ear ~ Lift your head from sleepy pillows Come, we go to fair Arcadia Here neath falling fronds of willow A spinning wheel, to weave a dream ~ Two golden threads of cherished memories A ribbon that tied a true loves hair Four strands which bind desires together Spin the twisted web with care ~ Pull aside the shadow shrouds Hitch a ride on gossamer clouds Through a thousand stars we climb Travelling the winding road of time ~ Here in these Elysian Fields Of butter yellow and misty greens Choose from all the countless pleasures Pick the velvet rose of dreams ~ The die is cast, the choice is made Breathe deeply from the perfumed flower To wander through the land of wishes Until the calling waking hour |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Enjoyed the calm feeling after reading aloud. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
" Arcadia" . . . "Elysian Fields" . . . Sounds like you might in my neck of the woods . . . This is a dreamcatcher plac for sure . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Reading pleasure at its Elysian best. I posted a similar poem before reading this this morning..I like this one better.. Rhyming poetry certainly is not dead..If someone thinks so, they should read this poem. Well done, Cari. "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." Carl Sandburg [This message has been edited by ice (01-23-2016 07:59 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely captivating read, Cari. Love it. Margherita |
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