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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-01-22 06:32 PM





Stealing through the open window
The traveller of the night draws near
Gliding silent to the bedside
Bends and whispers in your ear
~
Lift your head from sleepy pillows
Come, we go to fair Arcadia
Here neath falling fronds of willow
A spinning wheel, to weave a dream
~
Two golden threads of cherished memories
A ribbon that tied a true loves hair
Four strands which bind desires together
Spin the twisted web with care
~
Pull aside the shadow shrouds
Hitch a ride on gossamer clouds
Through a thousand stars we climb
Travelling the winding road of time
~
Here in these Elysian Fields
Of butter yellow and misty greens
Choose from all the countless pleasures
Pick the velvet rose of dreams
~
The die is cast, the choice is made
Breathe deeply from the perfumed flower
To wander through the land of wishes
Until the calling waking hour

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2016-01-22 07:16 PM


Enjoyed the calm feeling after reading aloud.
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2016-01-22 07:29 PM


" Arcadia" . . . "Elysian Fields" . . . Sounds like you might  in my neck of the woods . . . This is a dreamcatcher plac for sure . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

ice
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3 posted 2016-01-23 07:27 AM


Reading pleasure at its Elysian best.
I posted a similar poem before reading this this morning..I like this one better..

Rhyming poetry certainly is not dead..If someone thinks so, they should read this poem.

Well done, Cari.

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

[This message has been edited by ice (01-23-2016 07:59 AM).]

Margherita
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4 posted 2016-01-24 03:00 PM


Absolutely captivating read, Cari. Love it.

Margherita

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