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Open Poetry #49

Cupid's Dilemma

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2016-01-17 09:37 PM

a void in thinking
sensing loss of certainty
without assurance
...relaxes bow and sheaths arrow

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2016-01-17 10:16 PM

quote:
...relaxes bow and sheaths arrow

In that case, I relent and give you your due!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

2 posted 2016-01-18 12:41 PM

Hah! Touche'!

88 <----<<< arrows (each one comes with a willowy female suited perfectly for you JerryPat!)

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

MissMarti
Member
Posts 87
USA

3 posted 2016-01-18 10:28 AM

I like your "little poems."

"Faith is taking the first step
Even when you don't see the whole staircase."
MLK

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

4 posted 2016-01-18 11:10 AM

Thanks for reading Miss Marti!

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2016-01-19 04:01 PM

Oh, when Cupid is in such a dilemma, it will be somebody's loss. Give him an ultimatum! To save what can be saved!

Very nice and intriguing.

Margherita

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

6 posted 2016-01-20 02:37 AM

Maybe he can fix his bow in time for valentines day!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2016-01-21 12:41 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2016-01-22 06:19 PM

Wow, this just makes me want to sigh. I like the thought of a hyper cupid shooting more arrows than warranted over a hesitant one, but sadly still can relate to the latter.

Michael

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