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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia 
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What has happened to your love, poor thing? You’re empty, done Close your eyes If he doesn't deserve you to live for him He’s not worth dying for either . 08/01/2014 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This is yet another sad one, but at least it has an opening of the eyes to maybe a better future. ~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen. When something inside you has died, you still go on living. Realizing it's not you yourself who has died though is something many people struggle with, and some never achieve. The choice to go on living is a conscious one. You summed this up very nicely. Michael |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Excellent, my friend! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, yes, YES, Gale!  There are plenty of good fish in the sea, they say. My very best wishes that you will find the very best!  Owl |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, my friends, for reading and commenting! As one guy said "... it is the turn in your poem which allows for interpretation."  When I wrote these words I sooner meant the alternative idea: when you love, you won't betray this world and your beloved people, won't reject everything, you'll be strong. Still unrequited love is love, and love is patient. But when you don't love, then what's the point in dying? While someone keeps me sane, I should remember it, shouldn't I? ) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
you are Wise and poet, these are high qualities for sharing emotions, have a nice day yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...James |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, Yann! Thank you, James! I would like to be wise, not only sagacious ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
lots of wisdom here...james |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Thank you, James, once again! So nice of you that you've digged it out Seems that I haven't visited pip for ages, too busy and mostly offline ((( I miss you all! |
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