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Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

0 posted 2016-01-11 03:22 AM

Perhaps this life
is looking for
its end in me

Like grasping
for a goldfish
in pitch black waters

A chasm for every
grain of sand
each unlike the other

no needs, no cares
no knowledge
not a moment known to pass

Perhaps this life
is just looking for an end
and finding it in me

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2016-01-11 06:25 AM

Capo my dear, I don't believe I care for your tone here, you sound forlorn. We can't have that. Take two Idas and call me in the morning... ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2016-01-11 12:31 PM

I can absolutely relate, Mr Martini . . . But tomorrow is another day . . . Sun may be shining then . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

3 posted 2016-01-11 03:33 PM

quote:
"Perhaps this life
is just looking for an end
and finding it in me"

This may very well be true for you Martini, but you know how I feel...I mean, you know how I feel about spreading rumors.

I'd take Miss Lori's advice if I were you and see your 'pharmacist' as soon as possible.

88's bud!

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

4 posted 2016-01-12 03:28 AM

Merci beaucoup mon cher Lori Rhoden. If anything is left of me after "two Ida's", I'll give you a jingle.

Just don't expect much.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA

5 posted 2016-01-12 02:32 PM

Hope not Mr. M, you have too much to offer.

rainyJ

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2016-01-12 05:14 PM

Perhaps! Perhaps Life's desire to be LIVED is stronger than your melancholy. Now imagine the goldfish in pure crystal waters and feel your heartbeat as the most wondrous tune ...

No, I tell you, it's too soon ... and who says it (life) ends? It transforms! But not yet, I agree with Jan!

Your poem is thought provoking and intriguing, makes me want to uplift you though.

Margherita

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