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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2016-01-10 09:45 AM


I was a man-child in tha day
And I was just looking to play
Looking for ways to set me free
Searched over here and I searched there
Didn’t want to be anyone's square
Looking in gutters for the key
Walked into places on a dare
Got out with a wing and a prayer
I looked for me and then I'd flee
Fists clenched, I was on a flash point
Smiling ladies saved me sometimes
I traveled this land from sea to sea
But it is the here and the now
I'm who I am without kowtowing
The difference between now and then
It was in the marsh I found my Zen

Will never get better than that.


~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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Margherita
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1 posted 2016-01-10 09:50 AM


Great introspective write, dear Jerry. Your NOW awareness is tangible and indeed that was the goal!

Much enjoyed.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2016-01-10 10:13 AM


Many thanks Margherita! You leave such gentle and pleasing comments, thank you again.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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3 posted 2016-01-11 06:26 PM


Well, we all choose the roads to our Zen, and some of them are strange enough.
A nice poem!
And nice to see you here again, Jerry!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-01-11 06:30 PM


Thank you, Gale, it is nice to be back.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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