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Cari
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Englnand

0 posted 2016-01-10 07:01 AM



A flutter of pigeon wings

Trip’s the cogs of reflection

The smell of Paris

Under a September sun

From a leftover summer

~

We pause on the Rue Dante

Laughing at the cracked bell

From the old church of Saint-Severin

A ruptured call to morning Matins

Discordant in the quarter peal

~

This rose bud of attraction

Given so little time to flower

We cling to time

Clutching togetherness

Begrudging the passing hours

~

There was a time

As you spoon played your coffee

Bright eyes, softened

Calling for love

I looked away

~

The resting place of the Little Sparrow

We lay roses on the black marble

Sadness in the crying clouds

I take you in my arms

And kiss away the tears.
Non, je ne regrette rien

[This message has been edited by Cari (01-10-2016 07:59 AM).]

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ice
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since 2003-05-17
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1 posted 2016-01-10 07:51 AM


"No, I regret nothing"

Your song is better than that one in my opinion...:-)

Something personal in the last stanza-that I don't quite understand..but poetry is like that sometimes, and the form of this poem makes up for any mystery that it holds..

Cari
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Englnand
2 posted 2016-01-10 08:22 AM


Sorry Ice, I don’t know what happened to this the stanzas were jumbled up I’ve done an edit to put it right.

The poem concerns a short affair I had with a French girl I met when she helped me out with my French when I was trying to order a meal. Our favourite meeting place was a café where they played the old records of Piaf – The Little Sparrow, and Charles Ternet- La Mer.

Our farewell meting was by the grave of Edith Piaf, hope this explains the poem  

ice
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3 posted 2016-01-10 08:31 AM


I see...that explains it..good poem anyway, without the explanation..but thank you

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-01-10 09:36 AM


Nice thoughts turned into words concerning the passing of an affair and those long dead romantics which embolden it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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