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A Place to Go
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A Place to Go |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I found a place That's full of grace Not far from here Lend me your ear I shall explain Its down a lane A crooked road Has no zip code A Hideaway Where we can stay We'll have some fun And when we're done We'll go back home Where we came from ©November 20, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
heh heh... I know how this one ended...Jill came home with a smile and an empty bucket...~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Could very well end like that, Lori . . . Gotta love it! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Lend me your ear!" ... Temptations of youth, Jerry!  Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes! Yes! Yes! Youthful temptations, Margherita, some were highly charged and very passionate. Some, however lead down a troublesome word. How we lived through these temptations (some did not) I'll never know. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
When I would run off to our little spot with my 'gal pal', there were no zip codes! ...but she had a father who frequently cross-examined me like Perry Mason! She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, Ticklefingers, as well he should have, I'm sure you developed the same winning personality you have shown us here at PiP. Of course being the gentleman you were, and still are, you refrained telling him his daughter was the sort that would sate herself come what may . . . ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
'Its down a lane A crooked road Has no zip code A Hideaway' This can take ones imagination many places. Enjoyed JP rainyJ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, you are correct, Rain, the true meaning of this one is whatever you think it is and where this "Place to Go" is . . . Thank you for your rad and comment. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
It's charming! Like love lyrics and children's rhymes at the same time! Simple and beautiful, intriguing and comforting ) Well done! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am honored that you like my poem, Gale, than you. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
This the cuteyist poem you ever wrote I'll bet! I really like it a lot Jerrypat2! It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, I enjoyed writing this little ditty, thank you, DV. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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