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Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

0 posted 2014-02-21 12:19 PM

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Each day, I continue

To write
all my wrong

Love can be short
when you want,
to belong

Life can belittle, the chosen
who praise

Death is the twilight
of all
of our daze

My veins are forsaken
of all
of their ink

The color of all of my
verses
are pink

The penance is
thick
but the parchment
is thin

The dawning is dew
on the lien
of my chin

Trying to bite
on the wings
of a song

Giving you everything where I,
belong

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Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

1 posted 2014-02-21 03:49 AM

Very mellow morning poetry Richy. Smooth flow and easy reading.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-02-21 06:28 AM

I'm with Mr. Mellow Richy! love the x-ray (even if I'm such a ditz I didn't recognize it at first)Enjoyed it with the first cup of java.

Lori

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

3 posted 2014-02-21 07:40 AM

You two can dispense with the "Mr." stuff and just call me by my first name...Marsh.

True as blue, that is a great X-ray.

(Sorry for taking up the extra space)

...just bein' Bluesy

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2014-02-21 09:09 AM

thanks you two for always being there with a kind word..

tgif!

have a great weekend

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2014-02-21 10:31 AM

So while at the airport these two said "Why not" and quickly on the sly entered an empty security machine.Any where will do for some.

Speaking to the photo not the words. Love to you Richy. jo, another mother to another son.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2014-02-21 07:50 PM

Each verse could stand alone yanno~
Your poetry is wise and wonderful and packed with heart and soul.

Richy, you are such a fine poet and I always enjoy your insight into
everyday life as we know it.

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2014-02-23 02:39 PM

thanks jo..

what exactly did they do in that security machine?

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

8 posted 2014-02-23 02:43 PM

thanks so much Lori it was great to hear from you.. you're the best

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

9 posted 2014-02-23 03:50 PM

Very, very introspective, Richy. There are lessons to be learned withing the confines of this poem.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

10 posted 2014-02-23 03:55 PM

thank you my friend..

as from your's as well

hope your weekend is going well

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