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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2016-01-05 09:24 PM


        How Love Should Be

You come to me …

in the warmth and magnificence
   of the setting sun

in the lingering twilight on a soft
   Summer’s eve

in the beauty of the silver moonlit
sands by a deep-forest lake

in the silence of a most peaceful
night and  the magic of a dream

in the lovely mists, colors, and
life’s awakenings with the dawn

in the endless promise of the
   morning star

in a thousand finest reveries
   of the waking hours

for you are the all of these to me
   and infinitely more

                  --- b. e. adams


© Copyright 2016 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
sim0riah
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1 posted 2016-01-05 09:47 PM


in the lovely mists, colors, and
life’s awakenings with the dawn

Great phrase!

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2016-01-05 10:30 PM


Love this tender beauty.

Happy new year, dreampoet.

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2016-01-05 10:43 PM


Thanks to both of you for posting replies on this 'write!'
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2016-01-06 11:23 AM


Love awakens the soul!

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2016-01-06 01:14 PM


yes ... indeed it does, JP !
Ticklefingers
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6 posted 2016-01-06 03:27 PM


Yes SHDP, all these things and "infinitely more".

Warm and wonderful thoughts.


88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Margherita
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7 posted 2016-01-06 03:41 PM


She listens ... the energy of love that you emit with your beautiful poem finds its way to her soul and connection is established.

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2016-01-06 09:16 PM


once again ... thanks so much, 'TF' and Margherita !
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