Open Poetry #49 |
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A Single Girl in London. |
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Cari Member Posts 411 Englnand |
For a small town girl Alone in the sprawl of the creaking metropolis She kept to the bustle of the hurrying crowd Lacking the courage to explore London’s surfeit of nooks and crannies Where Dickens once walked the Victorian cobbled alleys and beyond Passed unnoticed by wide eyed tourists Harried by their clip board minders Mindful to keep to the tight schedule. Long enough now for wonder to subside With time to absorb the lessons to be learnt By taking the bus over Westminster Bridge To avoid the Tube’s rush hour crush of humanity and the wandering hands of marauding touchy feelers Friends are hard to find north of the Thames Work time colleagues return home to suburbia Leaving London to the empting streets Feral cats emerge to scavenge the waste bins While the bag lady beds down in a vacant doorway In an Italian coffee house on the Lambeth embankment She found a special place to sit and scribble Where the customers provided flesh for her characters Where Giovanni breaks into song when the trade slackens and Amor di Pastorello is in tune with the lapping tide |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You succeeded very well in describing the atmosphere of London from the viewpoint of a single girl. Big towns can be the loneliest places in the world at times. I am glad the girl found that special Italian coffee house where a touch of human warmth could be experienced. ![]() Margherita |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Oh Yea... this is street poetry at its best.. Inspired by daily life, like Lou Reed used to do.. "I'm no urban idiot savant spewing paint without any order I'm no sphinx, no mystery enigma What I paint is very ordinary" Lou Reed , from "Images" Excelent read....Thanks Cari "Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Reminded me, a young man from small town Arkansas, and my very first foray into metropolitan New York City. ~ Do what you have to do to feel right, I'll do my best to be alright. ~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this story as I was once separated from a group in Rome and had to find my way. An enlightening experience at best. Thanks for the memory. jo perry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderful...james |
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