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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-23 02:35 AM


Wishes in a dream
Pennies shine in a fountain
Ankle deep in love

Leaning into words
Just thinking before drinking
Nectar of the gods

No one to deny
Those days are dead behind me
Easy to get old

Harder to stay young
Take whats yours and leave the rest
I want my life back

Write in subtle tones
Believing every word
Not the poker chips

Look up from your sleep
What do you see above you?
Lanterns in the sky

Glowing like my eyes
Warming the cold in my heart
Each time you wake me

Drifting back to sleep
Humming a sweet lullaby
Fairy-dust slumbers
                        
                                       It ain't easy bein' me, for you or for me.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

© Copyright 2015 Mr Martini - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2015-12-23 05:59 AM


Wonderful series of emotions, dear Mr. Martini, so beautifully structured and profoundly captivating.

I haven't added anything to my library in a long time, this one deserves to be read more than once. It vibrates and talks vividly.

Margherita

oh, and no, as you say "it ain't easy to be me ...." but aren't you just lucky to express your emotions like this?!


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-12-23 06:36 AM


What tender emotions here friend. It flows smooth as silk sheets. ~L
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
3 posted 2015-12-23 07:04 AM


'It ain't easy bein' me, for you or for me."

perfect!
Im going to steal that phrase, 'cause it fits me.

"Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance."
Carl Sandburg

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2015-12-23 09:23 AM


Ahhh . . . Big congrats on the poet who wrote this hard-rock piece, Mr Martini . . .

~ Do what you have to do to feel right,
I'll do my best to be alright. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
5 posted 2016-01-07 04:46 AM


v. well done !!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2016-01-08 08:28 PM


nice writing...james
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