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Breach of Trust
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Breach of Trust |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line 
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You said you thought you knew me And you did Why then is there now fear in you You tremble so You said you knew me What did you expect then? Trust was placed in you Vulnerabilities were known to you Known also to you are my will and abilities So here you are trembling There is nowhere for you to go There is nowhere else for me to be Just you and I Like you never thought it would be Like a rat, you took the cheese and ran Ran right here, to me Trapped now, like the rat you are You tremble so No, Capos' not going to kill you So why have you stopped blinking? That part of you spent with her She wishes on a platter Like the head of John the Baptist Severed for the price of a dance You're trembling again Relax Ida tells me she has plans for you I think she really goes for eunuchs She's into the quiet types during her free time |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Dear Capo, That was chilling. Unnerving to say the least. You are formidable here and the work is full of foreboding. Well done. ~L |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Uh Oh. Martini's back to his old tricks again! Sounds like he's taking Miss Lori's "Jealousy" poem to the next level. I'd tell you this was a good writing friend, if I could figure out who it was good for.  88's pal  (Don't shoot Martini! I'm just the piano player!) She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
I've read your poems before and most of them are really scary. Are you really like all of it? I mean really? You look like a nice man but you think really mean things. Why not say something nice in your poems. It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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