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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-12-17 10:59 PM


The Eternal Dream of Love

As Life’s colors wash away
with the cold December rain
leaving this world of grey and
brown desolation lost in the
  fog of Autumn passing
the lonely mind and spirit-heart,
taking hold of nothingness,
drift away with the shadows.
Yet, beyond all desire, illusion,
  and sorrows of the past
there is still the eternal dream
  of Love.

              --- b. e. adams (12/17/2015)


© Copyright 2015 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line
1 posted 2015-12-18 01:56 AM


For better or worse, I take the good with the bad with the changing seasons, as yourself and others do, of course. But you Mr. Adams, find a unique line or two through the storms to reflect on love with graciousness and sincerity.    

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-12-18 07:26 AM


It is a sure-fire cold December this morning, with that rain you spoke of on its way, Bruce.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2015-12-18 08:20 AM


many thanks to both of you for your comments on this 'write!'
Namyh
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4 posted 2015-12-18 10:24 AM


Secondhanddreampoet - Sometimes when all else fails, a little dream of Love saves. Most enjoyed. Namyh
Ticklefingers
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5 posted 2015-12-18 11:13 AM


Poetry that always travels down peaceful paths.


88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2015-12-18 02:32 PM


again ... thanks to each and all of you for commenting on this lil' "poetic scribble!"
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2015-12-28 08:00 PM


enjoyed reading this...james
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2015-12-28 09:08 PM


Thanks, JM !
Marchmadness
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9 posted 2016-02-02 10:46 PM


Always.

secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2016-02-03 10:12 AM


Thank you! ... it's the grandest "New Year's Wish" as well !
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