Waiting on winter to Warm My Soul (repost)

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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2015-12-15 08:27 AM

Waiting on winter to Warm My Soul

Improve on nothing in your living.
Be as you were, and probably now are…

However, I ask
forget me never…
Moreover, know that in my heart
my love for you will be forever…

Understand that my heart is yours,
you did, without much effort,
conquered all.

I have nowhere to hide my infatuation for you –
It appears in my dreams
and in nameless love songs
and poems I pen for you,
and in whispers,
alive in those snowflakes
like the ones,
just outside your door…

Put your hand out and catch one,
and trust, that snow flake is as my heart,
melting,
just touching you…

I cling to memories in my heart,
warming memories of cold wintry snow.

Memories of winter with you
some loving, some silly with passion,
but always to hug
and hold
in that winter time’s cold…

A cup of warm chocolate,
or one hot coffee for two.
Never a dull moment with you,
never…

So until that wintry time,
that I may perhaps see you again,
I will be waiting on a wintry day
to be with you.

Just,
waiting on a winter to warm my soul…

.

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-12-15 09:27 AM

JL
Oh, this is soo beautiful! Heart warming to the point of melting! Lucky is the person this was written for! ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-12-15 09:36 AM

Like the title very much and the poem itself was outstanding with your remembrances of wintry days filled with passion to stave of wintrys' chill

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2015-12-15 12:36 PM

Thanks, Lori and Jerry!!
Hope all is well, Blessings my friends...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA

4 posted 2015-12-15 05:02 PM

This reminded me of 'Same Time Next Year'
wraps you warm inside.

Lovely write Poet JL
rainy J

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

5 posted 2015-12-15 05:07 PM

quote:
"Just,
waiting on a winter to warm my soul…"

Enjoyed your poetry JL and its lovely close as quoted.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2015-12-15 05:26 PM

quote:
Put your hand out and catch one,
and trust, that snow flake is as my heart,
melting,
just touching you…

Beautifully romantic, dear JL. A love that endures cold can be kept alive with warming memories.

Margherita

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2015-12-15 08:06 PM

A warm thank you!
Blessings:
Rainyday,
Ticklefingers,
and Margherita

Your replies were very kind...

Thanks,
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2015-12-17 12:21 PM

wow, this is nice writing...james

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2015-12-17 10:48 AM

Thank you, James...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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