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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-13 02:56 AM


Flung like
A feather
In a windstorm

My heart takes
Flight with
No set course

Reach out to me
Daughter of the earth
For this night I feel so lost

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-12-13 08:37 AM


I absolutely, one hundred percent and undeniably, relate!

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-12-13 08:39 AM


you are never lost
you are solid within your skin
birds of a feather

friends of different space
agape comes to take place
honor among thieves

~L

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2015-12-13 10:30 AM


Heart flights are the best, they instinctively know the right direction.

Beautiful!

Margherita

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA
4 posted 2015-12-13 11:10 AM


Oh..Yes..know that feeling well,
just last night..it was cold & raining,
a thunderstorm in Dec...matched my mood.
Enjoyed your write Mr. M.

rainy J

rosepetals36
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since 2010-07-09
Posts 137
Pa
5 posted 2015-12-13 08:50 PM


Definitely a poem I can relate to. I enjoyed

-- Used to be rosepetals25 :)

Mr Martini
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Posts 366
Beneath The Line
6 posted 2015-12-13 10:24 PM


Thank you Mr. Bolton.
Its good to see you've returned from your sojourn. The zeal exhibited in your reply defines something that we both are aware of. Please accept my best wishes for your good health, body and spirit.

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line
7 posted 2015-12-13 10:33 PM


Lori Rhoden, it is a belief of mine that you possess the strength and compassion of a Florence Nightengale. You always have an encouragement to share, and you do so freely and completely with a full heart.

Then there is this Phyllis Diller persona in you that could unmask the Lone Ranger.


Merci beaucoup mon amie.  

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line
8 posted 2015-12-13 10:39 PM


Margherita, rainyday and rosepetals,

Forgive my consolidating this reply of gratitude to each of you for your visit and warm, friendly comments. Please be assured I hold each of you in the highest regard.


Many thanks.  

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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