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Open Poetry #49

Meeting You

DaysofView
Member

since 2014-04-01

Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie

0 posted 2015-12-12 07:14 PM

'tis a flower so
delicate as you
I find myself
utterly breathless
for fear I
will blow you away
and I would
see you no more

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

1 posted 2015-12-12 07:25 PM

Poignant poetry for someone special to your heart. Very well done.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2015-12-12 08:20 PM

really nice...james

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2015-12-13 08:34 AM

Ahhh . . . There are words, and then there are words,

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2015-12-13 10:20 AM

Delightful!

Margherita

rainyday
Member
Posts 304
Heartland USA

5 posted 2015-12-13 11:07 AM

Days, Sweet & True..

I liked..
Rainy J

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