navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » Flamenco
Open Poetry #49
Post A Reply Post New Topic Flamenco Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Cari
Member
Posts 411
Englnand

0 posted 2015-12-10 06:54 PM



An old guitar, scuffed with age
Toned by a thousand melodies
Work torn fingers reach for the strings
Monotone of nostalgia, rising
He begins to play
~
Base notes, heavy with sadness
climb and fall in the cigarette haze
Heat, sweat and circling flies
as old men nod their understanding
Over glasses of raw red wine
~
She enters from the small curtains
Strong of thigh, broad hipped, high breasted
Gipsy eyed. Scornful of any approach
Sensuality untamed, untameable
I am woman, forget the impersonations
~
Single tap of steel on stone
Joined by a counterpoint
Of knuckle beats on table boards
Fevered eyes, leaking tears
Dribble lust from stubble chins
Recalling dead erections
~
Twisting faster now
Arms extended she dances
to orgasmic clapping
Her dress lifting, a flash of red underskirt
It is over, she pauses
Then dismissing us with a toss of her head
and vanishes into memory


© Copyright 2015 Cari - All Rights Reserved
DaysofView
Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433
Just A Slice Of The Pie
1 posted 2015-12-10 07:14 PM


I like Zorro and there is a great scene in a cantina with a dancer like this one. When her dance was done everybody was throwing coins and even a diamond! Good writing!

It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them.

Pete_W
Member
Posts 185
Scotland (UK)
2 posted 2015-12-11 08:35 AM


Great series of images, I especially liked the way she dismissed me, wonderful read and at Flamenco pace Thoroughly enjoyed.
Thanks
Pete

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #49 » Flamenco

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary