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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa 
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Effortlessly your laughter echos cutting through all the darkness you share all of you openly... effortlessly as you give your strength to all -- Used to be rosepetals25  [This message has been edited by rosepetals36 (12-10-2015 08:36 PM).] |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
To the person you were thinking of as you wrote this poem, they may never again receive such a warm and sincere compliment. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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DaysofView Member
since 2014-04-01
Posts 433Just A Slice Of The Pie |
Me too rosepetal36 so when I need one I ask somebody sometimes. I like your writing. Think more or ask someone you know if they know a title. It helps. It was just a thought which made them run. It was just an act that killed them. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I usually try to pick a favorite word or phase from my poem. I think a great title for this piece would be Effortlessly. It draws attention, draws the reader in...to a beautiful poem describing a beautiful person. ~L |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
rosepetal – Sometimes those echoes of someone whose laughter was filled with life effortlessly cut through our own darkness and for one brief moment we draw from it and are stronger. Most enjoyed. Namyh |
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rosepetals36 Member
since 2010-07-09
Posts 137Pa |
Thank you all for replying! Lori that sounds good to me -- Used to be rosepetals25 :) |
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