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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-06 06:09 PM


A hole without words
Is too deep to climb out of
Be not at a loss

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
1 posted 2015-12-06 08:28 PM


Insightful and flowing beginning to end while keeping within a 5-7-5 framework.

Good advice to boot!


88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-12-06 09:11 PM



Be not at a loss
Curse your way out of the deep
To hell with that hole

~L

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