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Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

0 posted 2015-12-03 04:33 PM

Timelessness

Even when the elements split the earth in me
and fling my crumblings into the scattered emptiness
of worlds ground to crushed chaos and smashed collision,
your Love will be my beacon thru the rubble
blinking in the nothingness,
dodging past the brokenness
and guiding me ‘til end of Time.

And when Night caves in from stars sucked out
by Age leaving days and shattered suns
slipping down Eternity at a million midnights per second,
your Love will be my flame in the black wind
blistering in the coldness,
emblazing me with boldness
and fusing me to your Love divine.

And when I measure my Life,
not by the number of breaths I take
but by your moments which take my breaths away
and not by the number of aches I’ve caged in heartbreaks
but by your conquest of my plundered ones set free.
Breathless may be the light of all precious stones
but only your Love shines the polished gem of me.

For I’m stained glass lost at night,
with a longing waiting mindless
in a trembling fingered blindness
for that moment rendered timeless
when your Love dawns the darkness
and I bathe in shafts of Light.

Namyh

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

1 posted 2015-12-03 06:32 PM

An engaging offering that kept my attention word for word.

This in particular:

quote:
"And when I measure my Life,
not by the number of breaths I take
but by your moments which take my breaths away

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2015-12-04 09:44 AM

this is a very deep play of words which is taking me into a ruminating ride. ..lovely write, and my fav is the last verse

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-12-12 08:19 PM

this is good writing...james

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2015-12-13 10:27 AM

Those timeless moments leave me breathless ... and you express this masterfully, dear Namyh. You inspire, I think I MUST write a new love poem!

Margherita

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