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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2015-12-02 06:36 AM




Yellow cat
Yellow cat
With the gold green eyes
Your claws pierce my thighs
On my lap you are kneading
My thighs near to bleeding
Yellow cat
Yellow cat
With the gold green eyes

LGRĀ©12/2/15

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-12-02 08:07 AM


I can hear Yellow Cat purring as he lances your poor thighs. They do get  carried away with their emotions at times.

~ My inner world is my paradise and i am its keeper ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2015-12-02 09:13 AM


Then if I don't scratch her ears long enough she will hook me with a paw and draw my hand back to her head. Then thank me with a love bite. ~L
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2015-12-02 11:51 AM


Demanding affection, my second wife was like that . . .

~ My inner world is my paradise and i am its keeper ~

rainyday
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4 posted 2015-12-02 02:55 PM


L, We are on the same wave length,
I've got a yellow cat too..he's got
a foot fetish.

Enjoyed..

ken206573
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5 posted 2015-12-03 02:15 PM


Love the poem, and cat's especially. Very vivid about the kneading your thighs with it's claws...OUCH!

Ticklefingers
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6 posted 2015-12-03 06:56 PM


We have an orange Tom that is loads of laughs. At least, I think we have a lot of laughs with him...maybe not.

Yours is a fun poem of your 'yellow cat'. Maybe you could have twice as much fun Miss Lori.

How about a FedEx overnight right to your door?


Only 88 scoops a day cleans the 'box'!   

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

jjote
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Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2015-12-04 08:22 AM


My active imagination is saying there could be a double entendre to the actual words..."kneading your thighs"? Methinks there's more to this than just yellow cat doing it...ok, delete my thoughts if you will.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2015-12-04 10:51 AM


Thanks everybody!
Quick note to Ticklefingers-She would shred your Tom if he tried to pay attention to her. She does not play well with others. The only reason she gets along with the dog is because he ignores her.

j jote- it is literal in meaning and I have the claw marks to prove it.  ~L

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