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A World of Words
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A World of Words |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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The sky is limitless in a world of words. Words spill out deepest dreams and fantasies. We create the parts and design the moves to our heart’s content. We dance the dance until our words are spent. LGR©12/1/15 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Don't know if you are using sky as a metaphor, for our ceaseless words we spill, but it would work for me. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes I was! You should know it well ceaseless writer that you are. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . I wasn't Sure, Lori, but yep, that is how I took it. ~ My inner world is my paradise and i am its keeper ~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Lori, I enjoyed this.I have heard it said that "a house without books is like a heart without a soul" do not know the writer but I agree. Jo |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Jo, I'm so glad you liked it! ~L |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
L, A poet's poem indeed, really like the last lines.. "We dance the dance until our words are spent" |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Words and thoughts are bonded, one cannot b without the other One of life's many wonders as you express such in the sweet poem |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
"We dance the dance until our words are spent". Stunning choreography Lori Rhoden. In constructing the steps then, what comes after 'Z'? Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Rainyday, I'm so glad you liked this poem. Thank you so much for letting me know. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey EmmaRose! Nice to see you! Thanks for the sweet comment! ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Kind Sir, What comes after 'Z'? Z wine of course...You can pour it into Z glass or drink straight from Z bottle.  ~L |
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