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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2014-01-06 09:07 PM

Black Ice

I didn't see it coming:
The brakes would not stop
The wheels would not turn
And then time stood still
I stood still in my car
While the world turned

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (01-07-2014 07:29 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-01-06 10:53 PM

Absolutely frozen in time fear.

~*~ All that we send into the lives of others comes back into our own. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2014-01-07 02:31 AM

I know that fear, Juju. Well done.
Ida

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

3 posted 2014-01-07 10:26 AM

gut wrenching feel to this good poetry

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2014-01-07 04:16 PM

It's certainly an odd feeling when you turn the steering wheel and the car keeps going where it was going. Enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

5 posted 2014-01-07 10:14 PM

Terrible feeling!
And you've described it so well, Juju )

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

6 posted 2014-01-10 09:15 PM

Wow....
Julie, just....

Wow

Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2014-01-11 07:45 AM

real or metaphorical, it is outstanding, thanks for the moving reading,

yann

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2014-01-11 05:47 PM

enjoyed...James

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2014-01-27 11:34 AM

JuJu...Enjoyed very much. Makes me think about life and not knowing what the future
has in store for us...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2015-02-17 10:27 PM

wonderful write!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

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