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You Can Get There From Here |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line 
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Dark grey granite like weeds protrude Quiet in their solitude Pale white faces lay within Gold-capped teeth can only grin Pant-legs flat which once were round Bone for lips can utter no sound Early we rise, later we fall Is the destiny of us all Cling to love as love allows Honor those who share your vows For then as time claims you and I We will have loved until we die Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Love it! from the grave to the aisle. Very creative indeed. There are those that would love this incorporated in their wedding vows. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Those last four lines a just wonderful, Mr Martini. There is no way they could have been said any better. Touched me where it matters. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"We will have loved until we die."...very nice...james |
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Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
Thank you Lori Rhoden, JerryPat2 and JamesMichael for your attentions and replies. Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Yes, looking at things as if they were already broken...this Buddhist concept is what I see in your poem..and I believe it is the only way to love some one, or things incredibly. enjoyed your poem. |
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