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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2015-11-10 09:22 PM



Set-Free


We parked the car
we jumped into the ocean
here was an opportunity
to swim with the dolphin's;

it seemed like they
welcomed our presence,
as for us
we enjoyed their essence;

the water was cool
just like we expected,
our joy was full
our souls redirected.


JamesLee
11/10/15


  


  


  

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latearrival
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1 posted 2015-11-10 09:47 PM


A refreshing swim is always welcome.Jo
jjote
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2 posted 2015-11-10 11:46 PM


Ahhh..to be young and alive like this..it's truly a setting free moment. Enjoyed the images
Margherita
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3 posted 2015-11-11 05:19 AM


Well, dear James, this is a wonderful rendering of your exceptional experience with the dolphins, shared with your love.

Even if we are not as lucky as you to be close to the dolphins to enjoy their physical presence, we still can enjoy their spiritual closeness even thousands of miles away.

Thank you for this magical moment shared.

Love,
Margherita


JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-11-11 08:53 AM


Just be sure and scan far and wide for the dreaded sharks, they feed on dolphins.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
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5 posted 2015-11-12 08:49 AM


a great communion,adored it


yann

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2015-11-12 09:33 PM


Thank you latearrival, jjote, Margherita, Jerry and 2islander2 for the lovely response...james
shalisadefa
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7 posted 2015-11-15 06:06 PM


you made me long for such a day, haven't had a day like this in a long time. Careless bliss.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2015-11-16 08:58 PM


Thank you Shalisadefa for the nice remarks...james
secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2015-11-26 04:34 PM


dolphins certainly are magical creatures ...
thanks for the most pleasant 'write,' JM!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2015-11-27 08:05 PM


Thank you secondhanddreampoet for the nice remarks...james
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