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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2015-11-07 12:49 PM

The girl of Kansas City
has some burning look,
Champagne on her lips,
Disorders on mine,
her eyes are two dark almonds
Who crash my soul,
I drink liquors of time
I enjoy her sweet mangoes,
The girl of Kansas City
In fiery eyes
I want that she undresses,
I imagine to dance on her
In the dizziness of the words,
To convince her of the devil,
To make the nothingness sink
On her divine skin
here vacillates the black flag,
The unbearable look
from inappropriate desires ..

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

1 posted 2015-11-07 01:19 PM

Inappropriate? No way! Two dark almonds need to be seen through till the end!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-11-07 01:52 PM

Take the girl from Kansas City's approach and meet her eye into eye and allow her to reach for you and your eyes will mesh, so will the rest of you, in a sweet, physical way

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2015-11-08 02:00 AM

thanks redstart you are so right, alas some times i don't controlled anything Under my capricous skull, enjoyed reading you
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2015-11-08 02:01 AM

thanks Jerry, your words sounded like a spark of passion for me, enjoyed them

have a nice day

yann

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2015-11-08 11:51 AM

quote:
her eyes are two dark almonds
Who crash my soul,
I drink liquors of time

Wow, dear Yann, this is so passionately romantic.

Exquisitely worded!

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2015-11-08 12:18 PM

thanks Margherita, the poem relates to a girl i don't know (yet and ever ), just saw her at a football game at tv, but she had a very persuasive look that convinced me to write this "gentle" poem, thanks for your kind comment and the way you shared it

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2015-11-09 07:48 PM

Reminded me of that old song called "Kansas City"; the words were, "Kansas City, Kansas City here I come, they got some crazy little women there and I'm gonna get me one."...james

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2015-11-09 09:29 PM

thanks james this is a bery interesting comment and a song i will discover

have a nice day

yann

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