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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2015-11-04 10:00 AM





Life is like chocolate…
It can be bitter or sweet.
Life is like the wilderness…
Rugged or serene.
Life is like a story…
It can be short or complete.
Life is like a city street…
Exciting or mean.
Life is like a train…
It can be fast or slow.
Life is like a cookie…
Crumby or full of nuts.
Life is like an ocean…
It can be a cresting wave or undertow.
Life is like your nose…
You only have one, no ifs, ands or buts.


LGR©11/4/15

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2015-11-04 10:09 AM


"Life is like a cookie…
Crumby or full of nuts."

Heh.Heh

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2015-11-04 10:27 AM


  
    

Ticklefingers
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3 posted 2015-11-04 12:40 PM


Life is like Miss Lori's poem
It may stay or it may roam

Life is knots were it not so
One deep breath then let it go


Splendidly inspiring poetry Miss Lori.

      ...Sorta makes me want to watch 'Forrest Gump' instead of my usual dailies.


88's 'fer fun

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2015-11-04 01:01 PM


Thanks TF,

I had hoped to write something a little more serious but I couldn't quite pull it off and had to default to humor. ~L

latearrival
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5 posted 2015-11-04 03:38 PM


Life is ours to make of it what we will.

jo

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2015-11-04 05:14 PM


Jo
you are right...but you have to believe it...or at least understand it or you make your life according to everyone else. The sooner you learn that life lesson the better. ~L

latearrival
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7 posted 2015-11-04 10:19 PM


Lorie, I understand your feelings and thoughts. Most women deeply feel they  are   here to take care of others. Sometimes it is never ending.I have to remind my self that I knew when I married and had children that it was a life time commitment. I have never been able to just walk away especially after I became a widow. There were still adult children who have needs. So here I am. I also never thought I would still be around to be able to help out.So I manage to keep that smile. love to you, Jo  
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2015-11-09 07:39 PM


enjoyed reading this...james
Sunshine
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9 posted 2015-11-09 08:45 PM


I think I will take on the cookies...maybe I can outbake them. Hugs, friend.

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