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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I rambled city streets wandered the countryside I've slept in places you wouldn't believe sown my seed and plundered what I was missing was the strength of a woman a woman's touch healing power and eyes bore of history's liberation for my lost soul I needed the feel of her comfort the solace of her charm and her true concerns like a quiet snowfall and the springtime of her smile would that she could have lead me out of my despair and into the consciousness of my soul when I would have strayed too far beyond when the street life beat me down and put my life in confusion grant me the resolve of a woman ©August 17, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-13-2015 09:53 AM).] |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I feel this as a call to Mother. Your needs were so deeply rooted in your sad young life. You moved around so much as you searched, you did not give a woman the time to really know you.Just my thoughts upon reading this. best to you Jerry. Jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your thought are, as they say, "right on," Jo. You always seem to capture the moment with my poems, god knows you have read enough of them. Thank you. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
"woman needs man and man must have his mate, that no one can deny"... "People, People who need people..." "When a man loves a woman... ...oh my, make me stop! Everything is in a song somewhere. Good introspective writing JerryPat. A little levity is also good for the soul. Try to find some wherever and whenever you can and play your best bluff with the cards you're dealt. Me? I'm a chicken...I fold. 88's your way friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"play your best bluff with the cards you're dealt" I try to, I'm not too good a folding. Thanks, Ticklefingers. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
for a man to want a woman to love is a good thing...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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