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Open Poetry #49

My Baby Is Really Built

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-10-01 11:55 PM

a perfect body
beautifully flowing curves
each one smooth, imitating the other
comfortable in my hands

tones that resonate sweetly, completely.
each note, an instrument
each chord, an orchestra
each strum, a lover's caress

each string, reaching out for fulfillment
blending, in a melody of rapture
a precise vibration
leading to a climactic end

satisfied, she softly fades
becoming so peacefully silent
I lay her down upon her velvet pillow
and quietly cover her well built body

...I've picked on her enough tonight

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

[This message has been edited by Ticklefingers (10-02-2015 12:16 AM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2015-10-02 08:20 AM

Lovely piece! Sweet twist! Write on! ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-10-02 11:49 AM

. . . and baby loves the way you serenade her . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

3 posted 2015-10-02 12:26 PM

Thanks so much for your comments Miss Lori and JerryPat!

I'll pass them on to 'her' when next she rises.
88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

shalisadefa
Member

since 2009-08-13

Posts 114

4 posted 2015-10-13 07:09 PM

ahaaa now I understand why you call yourself 'tickle' fingers.

Naughty you!
loved it!

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

5 posted 2015-10-13 07:46 PM

You're a sly one shalisadefa!

...you 'picked' right up on all my brew-ha-ha!

Many thanks for doing so!

88's yor way friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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