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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2015-09-20 08:36 PM

"Hello beautiful" he whispers
and suddenly I am
Nothing has changed about me
except the way his eyes see me
except the way his heart beats with mine
except the way that he loves me.
"I love you" he whispers
I have never felt the innocence
of love, yet that's what this is.
Open, full, unconditional
and I am ever amazed at what he offers
without a thought.
Its like he doesn't know
this is supposed to be hard.
I ask him why me?
He says who else could it be?
And I look around and think...anyone
But its me...me
And I cant help but say to him
I love you too
And when I do my soul takes flight
What an amazing journey
What an amazing man
to whisper to me "Hello beautiful".

for my Damien

[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (09-21-2015 08:01 PM).]

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2015-09-20 08:47 PM

Just Love This!

j.

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

2 posted 2015-09-20 09:32 PM

Poets often reside on lonely "one-way" streets, alleys and even park benches.

You made it to Park Avenue.

88's to you both.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-09-22 09:13 PM

And this is beautiful...james

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2015-09-26 03:27 AM

Oh this almost brought tears to my eyes, Paula... the good kind. What you have delicted here is a feeling most people only dream of. Simply beautiful.

Michael

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2015-09-28 11:58 PM

Lots of back alleys and park benches to get to this place...thank you all

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2015-10-07 06:55 PM

UM...I don't know how...but I did not send that previous reply...weird...but thanks to all of you

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

7 posted 2015-10-12 12:48 PM

"Nothing has changed about me
except the way his eyes see me"

I have always felt the love my husband showed was through his eyes more than anything else. Loved this poem. Jo Perry

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

8 posted 2015-10-12 08:34 AM

What a wonderful piece of poetical writing, Paula(my daughter's name). Yes, there is no feeling in this world better than being showered with love, and returning same.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

9 posted 2015-10-12 08:47 AM

This is wonderful! Those magic words are the "comfort food" of love talk! And there is nothing like your own secret recipe from your own home cookin'. ~L

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